Sunday, 2 March 2014

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Thesis statement: Young people who live at home have several advantages

Topic sentences:

  • First, young people who live at home get spiritually, morally and financially support from parents.
  • second, they feel convenience.
  • third, the last but not least, young people who live at home get nutrition food every day.

Home-sweet-home. No bodies deny that home is the best place to live; there is no place like a home. No matter how small and old your home is, it always be the best place ever. However, there are several considerations to live at home. One of them is the age factor. It’s probably common for young people to live alone, apart from their parents. Though, numbers of young people still choose to live at home, with their parents. Research asserted around 3.3 million young people (in the age range of 20-34) lived with their parents in 2013, according to the Office for National Statistics. The data a bit surprising, but young people who live at home at least have these three reasons as its advantages: get spiritually, morally and financially support from parents, feel convenience, and get nutrition food every day.

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